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SUBJECT: # 40 SHANE
DATE: DECEMBER 17TH 2551
LOCATION: CLASSIFIED
INTERROGATION: 87-35

Shane sat at the table in the interrogation room,he looked at his hands  that where held togther in a hold.A woman in a oni  lab coat walked in.Her hairwas light brown hair and in a ponytail.She was around her mid twentys,and wore glasses.She pushed her glasses back up to the bridge of her nose,got her notepad then walked to the table.She sat down across from shane,then flips her notebook and pulled the ink pen out from her pocket*

"Subject 40 begin interrogation"Alexandria said while looking at shanes left eye,which had fully recovered from the eye poke machine."that eye is looking better".she said

shane didnt look at her he just stared at his hands,he wore a white paitent outfit,and he wore white slippers,oni made sure any canidate for the project was unable to create harm to themselves,this is why they are not allowed to have shoes.

"Now tell me subject 40,can you tell me your name?"aleandria asked.

" s-sh-shane..." shane had said.

Alexandria looked up suprized,her pen fell in between the crack of the notepad.

"Again what is your name?"she asked.

shane looked up his bangs covering the  left side of his face and barley revealing his right eye."Shane." he said looking at he rwith his blood red eyes.

Alexandria wrote a note on her notebook,much was detailing how suprized she was to see that shane rembered his own name.

"Tell me,do you rember where you live?"she asked

"...i...i rember a grassy field.....a....a white house.....it overlooked a city....."shane said.

Alexandria was suprized again,she pushed her glasses up to the bridge of her nose and wrote in her notebook.

"Tell me.....do you know where your at now?"she asked

shane shook his head,his recent escape attemt failed,oni mebers sedicated him and strapped him to his bed for more thna 36 hours,he shook off the gorgyness and looked at alexandria

"Oni base....underground.....nicknamed the underworld....."he said

"How did you know that?"alexandria asked.

shane looked at his hands then back at alexandria.

"Rage."he said quietly

"Rage,it talked to you?"alexandria asked.

Shane nodded slowly.

Alexandria wrote that down in her notebook,she put details into it and a few questions she asked herself.

"Shane do you know where you belong?"she asked

shane looked at her,even with his bangs covering his left eye.

"I am my own person...i belong only to me...."he said.

"Shane.....you belong to us.....oni...were your family now..."alexandria replied.

"No i have a family."shane replied.

"Shane..." alexandria began

"Your familey is dead....they knew....and heather has no mercy for those that will try to compermis the project....im sorry shane....they died...we....we are your familey now."

shane didnt say anything to her,he just looked down at his hands.

"Well we're done for the day,guards please escourt him back to his room."Alexandria told the guards.

"Yes mam."one guard said as shane stood and was escourted back to his cell.

Alexandria flipped her notes,she was amazed at how well shane was making progress,shes interrogate him daily to see the progress he makes.

"Shane....you will be set free one day"she told herself as she walked back to her quaters and began to type on her terminal.
A series known as interrogation.it involes shane and alexandrias assists asking shane questions,much about rage and how he feels about it.though there will be other oni officers to come in and ask him questions.but for now the first interrogation is up.i hope you all enjoy it,and please comment and tell me if you want more of this.
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AncientEchidna Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww....

It makes me wonder since Alexandria said in this story that Shane would be set free one day, I wonder when that day would be....
You should try to make a story one day of when Shane gets his freedom and is happy again. :3
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InvaderArianna Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Based after our live RP, I presume? :hug: Except, I remember it being MUCH longer. XD Maybe I should have wrote it down.
Good job, though! :D
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Fallen-Warrior1023 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
very good, glad to see youre working again.
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Fire-Raven Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Looks good. I'd like to read some more =)
The only things that bugged me were the spelling and switching between past- and present-tense, but other than that it looks good. Keep it up!
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ODSTshane Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks,but any errors,please try to keep from telling me ^^; i read my post every now and then s if theres any errors,i will hadle with them in time so please^^ i hate to ask but please do not tell me i made errors^^
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Fire-Raven Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Alright. Sorry =S
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ODSTshane Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Student General Artist
its fine XD no reason to get sorry,but i was told this like 6 other times already ^^
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AncientEchidna Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a really good story, Shane! =D I'd love to see more stories of yours whenever ya make more. ^^
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TFFireFly Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Holy shit! Your writing has improved greatly! Spaced out, capitals and everything! Well besides that I love this whole interrogation with Shane it really let's you get to know him better along with what happened. LOVED IT!
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ODSTshane Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks :3
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