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Well...its been a year since reach....since i lost many friends and family,since i lost the love of my live,and...since i nearly lost my entire squad.But,i made a soul promise,i'd protect them with my life. I've had to many losses,but that ends this day.Heh listen to me rant i forgot to introduce myself, my name is Jack Christopher noeland.I'm and ODST (orbital drop sock trooper)i was a army soldier on reach....but thats past me now,i cant tell you the horrible memories i saw on that planet.Well anyways let me give you the rundown.Im a commander,and im with a unsc division thats always been known as the best of the best 1st disivion wolf pack.In second in command,and my right hand man,is my childhood friend,Dibs dubbo.He's austrailian,mean,and ready to kill the covenant,just the soldier i need for the second in command.He carries a pretty mean shotgun,its from  when we where on reach,the special thing about it,is that it as tree barrels on it.He regrets what happened to us on reach,he wont let that happen again,not even if the entire damn covenant fleet stands in his way.Then we have seth matthews another childhood friend.Seth is the sniper of the squad,never leaves the pack without that rifle.He is on a soul search for his fiance monica,a researcher trying to find a cure for some virus.Hes hellbent on makeing sure he gets her back,not the covenat,or the innsurection will stop that.Then we have Dex,my little buddy,hes basically the pointman,equiped with a m237 light  machine-gun.Get him in range of the covies and he'll blow the covies away in a heartbeat.Hes also very trigger happy and has a hyper personality.Next up is blake,hes african american,likes heavy weapons,and is mainly known as" big brotha" as the marines call him.He uses the Spunker alot(the rpg) and the machine gun turrent detachable.His personality is happy,and caring,this guy is a true member of wolf pack,he never leaves a man behind.Then theres rickey,hes....well kinda the smart elect of the squad,he uses the assault rifle and the smg,he and dex dont useally get along either.This is my team,and i want to make sure that they dont end up like what happened on reach.Ill throw down my life if i have to to ensure that.Well thats all i can write for today,it seems we got inssurectionist activity,time to get the wolfs prepped for the hunt.

Jack Christoper noeland out.
here it is finally.the proluge to ODST Brotherhood my odst story.The proluge is based of jacks point of view.the rest of the sory will be in thrid person.and yes for now they are fighting against rebels.

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facelessPysch0 Oct 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's not bad, there's some spelling mistakes and no spaces after the punctuation marks. Other than that it's pretty good. I'd just work on spelling and grammar.
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:icontheguywholikesweapon:
nice mate
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ODSTshane Oct 30, 2011  Student General Artist
thanks
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:icontheguywholikesweapon:
no problem man
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:icontrooper212:
Very cool dude.
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ODSTshane Oct 30, 2011  Student General Artist
thank you
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:icontrooper212:
Anytime dude. Beside who couldn't like the ODST's they are the definition of bad ass, well they are right below master chief but still you know what I am talking about.
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ODSTshane Nov 1, 2011  Student General Artist
haha yeha ahmen brotha
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:icontrooper212:
Honestly the lack of appreciation for the UNSC Marines and ODST's is pitiful. All you ever hear people talk about is Master Chief and the Spartans, He or they cant be everywhere at once.

I swear it makes me mad, no one ever talk abot or praises the Marine or ODST troopers so when I saw you story about the ODST, I thought well hell yeah, finally some recognition to the unsung heroes.
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ODSTshane Nov 1, 2011  Student General Artist
yep odsts and marines are the true heros,they dont have fancy sheilded armor that can stand against ballistic rounds,no these men and women are the troops chargeing into batles with our homes flag in hand.screaming with valor and courage against the covenat bastards.
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